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TotLH - Chapter 25

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Sun, 11/30/2008 - 19:35 — votishal

In which our hero finds himself drawn into an unanticipated intrigue.

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Thu, 12/04/2008 - 23:19 — votishal

Since I used the same bits

Since I used the same bits of audio for the herald announcing folks in both 23 and 24, I imagined some folks first listening to 24 thinking, "wait...did he accidentally put last week's up again?" But I decided the symmetry was worth that potential moment of confusion.

Very glad you're liking the story...much more to come!

- J -

Thu, 12/04/2008 - 13:44 — Chris

Getting better all the time.

John,

You seem to have hit your stride with the voice work. Early in the series there were times when I noticed an occasional inconsistency or distraction with the voices. More recently, however, the voice work has been pretty seamless. I rarely find that it gets in the way of listening to the story. In fact, it usually enhances the story.

The overlapping timing of the narrative for the last few chapters caught me a bit off guard at first. Perhaps due to the time gap I had between listening to chapter 23 and chapter 24. Once I figured out what was going on I really liked hearing the story as seen from different parts of the scene.

- Chris